Well, it’s almost a haiku. He just needs to swap his 2nd and 3rd verses.
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Lines, not verses…
Parodying "Skyrockets in flight, afternoon delight" perhaps…
Lines, not verses…Parodying "Skyrockets in flight, afternoon delight" perhaps…
That one doesn't ring a bell for me.
Earworm, ad nauseum, courtesy of the Starland Vocal Band
…to make a haiku rhyme……that's most certainly a crime….…in japan they'd never do it……so why did he pursue it ???…
…sorta ogden nash-ish, if you will…obviously my mostly misspent youth was not totally wasted…
…to make a haiku rhyme……that's most certainly a crime…….in japan they'd never do it……so why did he pursue it ???……sorta ogden nash-ish, if you will…obviously my mostly misspent youth was not totally wasted…
'Snot a haiku. It is, in fact, to the tune of the SVB earworm.
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Lines, not verses…
Parodying "Skyrockets in flight, afternoon delight" perhaps…
Lines, not verses…Parodying "Skyrockets in flight, afternoon delight" perhaps…
That one doesn't ring a bell for me.
That one doesn't ring a bell for me.
Earworm, ad nauseum, courtesy of the Starland Vocal Band
Earworm, ad nauseum, courtesy of the Starland Vocal Band
…to make a haiku rhyme…
…that's most certainly a crime….
…in japan they'd never do it…
…so why did he pursue it ???…
…sorta ogden nash-ish, if you will…obviously my mostly misspent youth was not totally wasted…
…to make a haiku rhyme……that's most certainly a crime…….in japan they'd never do it……so why did he pursue it ???……sorta ogden nash-ish, if you will…obviously my mostly misspent youth was not totally wasted…
'Snot a haiku. It is, in fact, to the tune of the SVB earworm.
'Snot a haiku. It is, in fact, to the tune of the SVB earworm.